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In my quest for the most terrorizing scary novels and stories for this first annual Sable Lit Reviews Spooky Friday Showcase, I received some amazing entries. While I liked some and loved others, every author who was showcased for this event should be proud of their stories and the way in which they told them.

So, who got the coveted bewitching Halloween spot???

None other than Twisted Tails III: Pure Fear….!

As an anthology of very talented writers, it provided a variety of stories highlighting what scares us most both in reality and the imaginative recesses of our minds.

Here’s the trailer (if you can stand it) and look forward to the review which will be posted on Halloween!!

 

While Twisted Tails III landed the coveted Halloween spot, the entry that truly had my heart racing and my nails bitten to bloody stumps was Barbara Karmazin’s Night Moves. I simply can’t get that psyco-vamp out of my head. As a result, look forward to more book reviews featuring Barbara as well as an author interview! Congratulations Barbara and the Twisted Tails Posse!

 

Happy Halloween-eve ghouls and ghoulettes, until next time! :)

 

Sincerely,

The Sable Lit Reviews Blog Mistress

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

THE GRAVE : The Finale

By GW Pickle

Suddenly I am no longer tired. I’m not lying in a cemetery dying. No, I’m dead. I feel so peaceful. I’m floating away from the grave, floating towards this bright light. Everything goes white as the light surrounds me. The next thing I know I’m standing on a on a hill. Looking off in the distance I see fields of green with a gold road that ends at a large walled city. Suddenly a hand grabs my shoulder. I jump reflexively, freeing myself as I turn around. I see myself. “Bill? Is that you, in my body?” I start to laugh as I realize that we’ll probably be trapped in each other’s body for eternity. God, I hope not. I want my body back.

“Yes, it’s me. I’m a bit surprised to see you here. What happened? Your so-called spell didn’t work, again. I was in good health. How did I die before you?”

“I can answer in one word, Linda. The B….” I can’t seem to say the word.

“I don’t think cussing is allowed here.”

 

“Bill, I died before you because Linda poisoned me. I couldn’t save her dad the way I saved myself.”

 

“And she settles the score and ends up with everything. Ariel, I should be mad at you for killing me, but for some reason I’m not. “

 

“The same way I should be furious at you for cheating on me.”

 

A winged stranger appears before us. “Bill, Ariel it’s time to make a choice.”

 

“What do you mean choice? I thought we were to be judged and either go to Heaven or Hell. That’s what I’ve preached all these years.”

 

“You’re right, but in some cases we give you a chance to go back.”

 

“You mean reincarnation?”

 

“Yes, but it’s your choice.”

 

“If I choose not to go back what happens?”

 

“You’ll be judged. Look the reason you are in Elysian Fields is you’re almost too good for Hell and not quite good enough for Heaven. We are giving you a second chance. My advice is to go back and start over.”

 

“One question, please, before I go back. What is your name?”

 

“Lucifer.”

 

Bill blurts out. “You’re the devil?”

 

“Yes and I serve God from Hell. He lets me come here to persuade those who should go back to do so.”

 

Before we could protest our surroundings start to fade. I see another angel appear. “Lucifer, I see you’re sending two more souls back to Hell again, without due process.”

 

Everything goes dark. I feel someone pick me up by my ankles and slap my bottom. I start crying. I hear someone say, “Linda, the first is the boy, and now, here comes his sister.”

 

                                  ***

 

G W Pickle

(c) All Rights Reserved by GW Pickle

Tell us what you thought!! Would you like to see more unpublished short stories like these ? Was this great or what?!?!

In the next month you’ll get a glimpse into GW Pickle’s published book, SENTI: Book One of the Jackwill Chronicles. He has submitted it for review and I can’t wait to bring it to you!!

Here’s the blurb on SENTI -

Major Jack Waco was the best pilot in the SENTI Command. A self-proclaimed loner, he thought he didn’t need anything or anyone until he met Major Maggie Wilson, who challenged those preconceptions. Maggie’s resemblance to an important person from Jack’s past revived memories and feelings within him, sending his head and his heart into turmoil. With a government conspiracy on-hand and large-scale interstellar piracy threatening the very stability of the galaxy, will Jack be able to cope with these newly-awakened feelings in time to succeed in bringing the guilty to justice or would he be betrayed by them - far out in a newly-discovered planetary system on the other side of the galaxy?

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The Grave - Part two

By GW Pickle

I wonder if Ariel was able to do the switch. It’s almost time to check on Bill. I get out of my car and head for the grave. I hope she doesn’t blow this. She blew daddy’s healing spell. Why couldn’t she switch dad’s spirit like the way she is doing now. “No.” Seeing Bill laying face down in the dirt I rush to his side and roll him over. I don’t see the flask. Lightly slapping his face, “Bill, Bill wake up. Bill, are you still with us?” I slap his face again.

 

“No, he isn’t. Bill has left this world and if you slap me once more I swear. Now help me over to the chair.”

 I grab Ariel’s extended hand and pull.  “Whatever you want Ariel, I mean Bill.”

 

Once seated she holds her head in her hands, “I need a drink.”

 

“He has a silver flask in his coat pocket. I caught him drinking from it.”

 

Finding the flask, she shakes it. “Over half full,” removes the cap, and takes a long draw.

 

I smile as she offers me a drink. “No thanks I must drive and you know how I feel about drinking and driving.”

 

“Fine, I’ll finish it myself.” Tipping the flask up once more she drains it. “Bill and his hard stuff. This soul transferring will really take it out of you. I suddenly feel so tired.”

 

“Why don’t you get in the sleeping bag and crash? You still have five hours to go before you can leave.”

 

“Sounds good to me, Oh Linda, want to join me? This bag is big enough for two and I am a man now. We can take our friendship to a new level. I’ve always wondered what it felt like for a man to have an orgasm.”

 

“Yes, I can see you’re now a male and I believe the term is come.” Moving close to him I reach down and run my hand across his crotch and smile. “I am tempted. Your husband seems to be rather well endowed.”

 

“Yes he was and that was one area of our relationship we had no problems with. So, how about it?”

 

Bill embraces me and lightly kisses my neck. He then runs his hands down my back and starts to pull my sweater up. I push him away. “I don’t know about this. Your terms were for him to be alone for the night.”

 

“Yes, but you were the exception, besides it’s cold and I’ve always had a crush on you and now we can really do something about it.” He unzips his pants and pulls out his fully erect manhood. “Now I know why men always are handling themselves. These things are so uncomfortable when they’re aroused while encased in underwear.”

 

I giggle at his comment and teasingly reply, “That may be so, but you could always masturbate. I’ve heard it’s the same as doing it with a woman.”

 

“No Linda, I want you, with me, naked in the bag, I want to savor your body.”

 

“I’m just not sure I’m comfortable with all this, you are or were my boss and I still think of you as a woman.”

 

“But I have a man’s body now. Let me show you.” He grasps one of my breasts. My nipples become instantly hard. I’m beginning to think I might just give in.

 

I wrap my arms around his neck and brush my lips across his and I whisper, “Reverend Bill.”

 

He pulls me down on top of the sleeping bag and runs his hand up my long skirt and I feel his fingers begin to explore my body.  I begin to desire him. My body grows feverish with an inner longing. I run my fingers through his hair and pull him to my mouth then deeply kiss him. He responds by spreading my legs apart and getting on top of me. A short time later we lay in each other’s embrace, in the afterglow of fantastic sex. “Linda, you were fantastic, that was the best I’ve ever had.”

 

“I’m glad.” A shiver goes through my body as the night coolness begins to sink in. “I need to go Bill, it’s getting colder and we really went too far. I really do have to go.”   

 

His face goes from a beaming smile to a long–faced frown. “Please stay with me for the rest of the night.”

 

“I can’t, Bill. The will prohibits it. You, we would lose everything. Your money and your business would be forfeit.  No, Bill I must go and go now.”

 

Bill struggles to get up and into the bag. His speech is slurred “Linda, can you give me a hand? I seem to be drunk. Guess I’m not used to his whiskey. You’re right; please help me get into the sleeping bag.”

 

I turn around and get him into the bag and zip it up to his neck. “I don’t want you to catch your death from the cold,” and we both laugh.

 

“Thanks for your help Linda. I couldn’t have pulled this off without your help.” Bill yawns and rolls over on her side. “I just wish I could have helped your father. But when I lost the fight with the disease I was honor- bound not to intervene again. I only found this loophole after he died. I’m so sorry. But I promise to spend the rest of my life taking care of you. ”

 

Kneeling down I can see she is almost asleep. I whisper. “Ariel, you can tell daddy how sorry you are when you see him. I lied about forgiving you. You back with the living, that isn’t acceptable. I don’t care how you felt about me or how good of sex we just had. I only had sex with you because it would be your last wish and for twenty million it’s the least I could do for you. I’m glad you liked it, but you really are going to die. I poured a full bottle of sleeping pills in the whiskey you just drank. I’ll just leave this suicide note, on the table, I will inherit everything and you will, in a sense, be taking care of me. How’s that for revenge?”

 

Ariel weakly struggles for a moment then lay her head down and close her eyes for the last time whispering. “You B…”

I leave the note under one of the candlestick holders and rush to my car. Driving back to my apartment I pray. “This is the best I could do daddy. You can rest in peace now.”

(c) All Rights Reserved by GW Pickle

Come on back tomorrow, you have to see how this ends!!! Feel free to comment or even guess at the ending!

THE GRAVE

By GW Pickle

I’m drunk and my dear wife is dead. Looking at the cemetery I feel my stomach start to contract. The sun is almost down and the moon will soon change the warm colors of day to the cold black and white of night. I pour myself another drink and rapidly drain the glass of liquid courage. Why did you have to have a graveside reading of the will on the eve of your burial? You made tons of money with your psychic healing show. Look what it got you, six feet under. Helping people, you Charlatan, in the end you couldn’t even cure yourself.

 

The driver lowers the partition. “It’s time Reverend.”

 

I sigh. Time to meet your attorney, dear and learn what’s in your will. The driver opens the door for me. A nippy breeze swirls fallen leaves around my feet as I get out. Approaching the gravesite I find the attorney sitting at a small white table next to the headstone. On the table are two burning black candles and a bottle of wine.

 

Looking up she motions for me to sit. “My name is Linda. I was your wife’s and am still the foundation’s Attorney. Sorry for your loss, Mr. Davila. I know you had your differences but she did love you.”

 

“She had a funny way of showing it.”

 

“Rev. Davila, since you are the only beneficiary I will begin.”   

 

“Please, it’s dark and this place is giving me the creeps.”

 

The headstone glows as Linda touches it. Ariel’s image appears. She is dressed in a white silk toga. Her iridescent eyes probe mine for a moment before she speaks.

 

”Bill, I have instructed my attorney to sign over my entire estate to you, in the morning, provided you do the following two things tonight. First you must join me for one last drink. You will have a glass of wine then pour the remainder of the bottle over my grave. Second, you must spend the rest of the night alone with me by the grave. Linda will observe the first condition and then check on you several times during the night. If you leave the gravesite for any reason before six AM, you’ll forfeit everything. One more thing, no cell phones and no visitors, so please give Linda your cell phone and open the bottle.” Ariel’s image disappears and the stone goes dark.

                 

                  “This is crazy. I can’t stay here. I’ll contest the will.”

              

                  “Then you will lose everything and it will take years and money to fight. Take some free advice. It’s only for one night and in the morning your net worth will be at least twenty million.”

 

                  “But it’s cold, where will I sleep?”

 

                 “I have a warm coat and a sleeping bag. Just lay it down next to the fresh dirt, slip into the bag, and cover your face with the coat. The next thing you know it will be six and you can go home a very rich man.”

   

             Shaking my head, “She wins one last time.” I hand Linda my cell phone and she gives me the wine. “How long did you work for my wife?” I pop the cork.

 

“Fifteen years, I started working for Ariel my last year in law school. After I passed the bar, she made me an offer and I stayed on. This is a once in a lifetime job.”

 

“How did you put up with her for that long? I bet you had plenty of problems with her ego.”

 

“The only problem I had was earlier this year when she tried to cure my dad’s cancer. Something went wrong and she got sick. In six months’ time I’ve lost my dad, my best friend, and my boss.” A single tear escapes her otherwise stoic features.

 

I reach in my pocket and offer her a handkerchief. “I’ll make sure you’re well taken care of.”

 

“Thanks.” She daintily blots her eye then hands me a glass. “I’m sure you will or as they say die trying.”

 

“Something like that.” I half fill my glass and take a small sip. “Burgundy isn’t one my favorite wines. If I must drink wine I prefer a dry white.”

 

“This was her favorite and it is her party.”

 

“Then this will be what I use to commune with the spirits and honor Ariel’s last wish.” I toss down the remainder then proceed to pour the rest of the bottle over the grave. Kneeling at the head I insert the neck of the bottle into the loose dirt.

 

Linda shakes her head. “I must leave but I’ll be checking on you throughout the night. The coat and sleeping bag are behind the gravestone.” She rapidly makes her way to a car parked a few feet away.

After she leaves I inspect the camping gear. Something falls at my feet as I unroll the sleeping bag. I pick up a silver hip flask; a note is taped to it. I sit in one of the chairs and using the candlelight read the note, “For use later on when it gets cold”. I stand up to relieve myself. “Well Ariel since I can’t leave and I do have to go.” Standing over the grave I start to urinate. The earth rumbles beneath my feet and a pair of green glowing hands grabs my crotch and pulls me to the ground. I pass out. I awake and find I can’t move or speak.

 

Ariel’s image appears on a very small TV screen. “By now Bill you are awake. Welcome to the afterlife. Well not quite yet. You see I’m not dead yet. I cast a spell on myself to slow things down. My body will die in a couple of hours. There will be no pain or suffering. I bet you’re wondering how you got in my coffin. Well there was a spell on and in the bottle of wine. The switch took place when you pissed on my grave. Why do this? You cheated on me, several times in fact, and I have unfinished business, How’s that for revenge?” Everything goes black.

 

(c) All Rights Reserved by GW Pickle
 

 

 

Stay tuned for Part II tomorrow!

Halloween Horrific Reads!

Happy Halloween!

Courtesy of B. Hathcock

Originating some 2000 years ago, the Celts from what is now present day Ireland, the UK and northern France began the Halloween tradition of marking the end of the summer’s harvest and acknowledging the often cold dreary winter ahead. Taking place during a time of year that is often associated with death, the Celts believed that the night before a new year, the barriers between the living and the dead became less clearly defined.  The day that we know as Halloween is also acknowledged as the day that ghosts of the dead return to the earth. Due to the spiritual activity on the day, many thought the predictions of Druid and Celtic priests were more easily attained.

In commemoration of the event bonfires were set for protection, Roman festivals were launched in celebration and observance of some Roman gods.

As death took on a more mysterious and scary tone the celebration of Halloween did as well. Now the costumes are scarier and superstitions run rampant.

Although Halloween customs vary around the world, here at Sable Lit Reviews, we just like the opportunity to be someone or something else for the day…whichever the case might be. And of course, we relish the opportunity to bring you some thoroughly spooky reads!

I hope you enjoy Sable Lit Reviews’ first Freaky Friday Horrific Read…its Sapphire Phelan’s suspenseful and erotic Beast Magic from Phaze Books!!